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Open Poetry #32

Light Storm Surge

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2004-06-14 08:02 AM

On a gray cloudy day
That had brushed the sun away
He walks barefoot in the sand
Waiting for the turn of night
Ankle deep where the waves creep
Lightly rain mixes with ocean’s weep
Leaving footprints in the sand
Others rush for warm and bright.

Raven hair and light brown skin,
Brown eyes match the suit she’s in
A mere handkerchief of clothes
Hiding enhancing what shows
Gives a grin as she dives in
Between crashes of surf swims
He’ll watch standing on the sand
Then,
quietly exit stage right.

Gloom

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2004-06-14 08:15 AM

Professor,
That gloom has earmarks of a tomb.
Well done, good read.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2004-06-14 09:59 AM

Why exit?

lovely.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2004-06-14 05:25 PM

I remember those days of sun and sand and bikinis...

~sighing~
M

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2004-06-14 09:52 PM

Imagery surperb!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2004-06-14 10:38 PM

Perfect sense...that's why the shore has such a draw! Grin.
TD

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