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Open Poetry #32

Washed Away.

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2004-06-12 09:54 PM

the clouds are pregnent with rain
it's so cold in this house
i think i'll go sit outside
let the rain pour down my face
to hide my tears

i remember when you used to visit me
with only your smile
you chased away my tears

now i sit here
alone and empty
waiting for the sun to come
and chase away this rain

the rain is pouring down hard now
it feels like it won't stop
but i'm alright with that
i always am.

i feel so pathetic
giving my heart to someone who never wanted it
who never cared.
she's a musician,
like you
all i have to offer is my written words
flowing like this rain
all i have to offer is myself

with pages of my silly ~~words~~ emotions,
let the rain wash them away..

p.s wish me a happy birthday,it was thurs i'm now 15..not the best birthday..oh well

Copperbell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

1 posted 2004-06-12 11:14 PM

Thank you for sharing. I hope many good things come your way girl.

jamesjiao
Member

since 2000-04-12

Posts 268
Backwaters of Avalon

2 posted 2004-07-22 04:20 AM

I have always been a big fan of your poems, exhale. You have been in my private library for quite some time now

.. Happy birthday to you!

- James
The beauty of nature is displayed,
not through itself,
but through the creatures
dwelling within its bosom.

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