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A Stare Into The Future
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A Stare Into The Future |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The earth calls clutch in candor upon my open eyes That gravity prevails and weightless time defies Once caught upon the notion that freedom came with wings I realize that free becomes release of knotted strings The air seems thinner in the skies Unveiling finger search devise The breadth of something more of substance blessed in bold conspire For not the ash or whim of wind does jubilance require A brave and noble note calls up my chin in glances long Taking in the notices of powers far more strong These thoughts that conjure miracles designing foment true That as I raise my eyes to see comes clear the heart of you Copyright Kkh 6/12/04 |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This touches me. Sandra |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
A brave and noble note calls up my chin in glances long "Taking in the notices of powers far more strong These thoughts that conjure miracles designing foment true That as I raise my eyes to see comes clear the heart of you" to see things from a distance, we see them clearer -- great write, as you always do, TD!  ...jo |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
enjoyed the read  |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wonderful write! Eric |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
Amazing poem! I am at a loss for words. It sucked me in and had me hanging on every word of it. You have created a masterpiece. Well done. Kevin |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Oh my goodness! I missed your writing, TD. Somehow I must find the time to get to Passions more often. Great piece! Patricia |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Outstanding, especially enjoyed The earth calls clutch in candor upon my open eyes That gravity prevails and weightless time defies Once caught upon the notion that freedom came with wings I realize that free becomes release of knotted strings ahhhh yes, no pain, no gain....tremendous poem....thank you |
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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
Another great poem by you... |
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