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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2004-06-12 03:39 PM





In dreams, you recognized
my secret longing~
to feast anonymously with eyes
feel again what was

you captured my glance
among a million faces
& together we remembered
when...

~tier

© Copyright 2004 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
catalinamoon
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1 posted 2004-06-12 04:45 PM


Sigh..what a lovely poem.
Sandra

iliana
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2 posted 2004-06-12 06:56 PM


Tier -- wow -- made me think:  predestined and precognitive and love at first sight -- magic!  Lovely writing!   ....jo

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Sunshine
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3 posted 2004-06-12 06:58 PM


...when...

~*~

Reminds me of several things,
my friend...
so good to see your beautiful name...

Dark Angel
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4 posted 2004-06-12 07:53 PM


soul mates?

beautiful Tier

Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

wranx
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5 posted 2004-06-12 11:30 PM


Yes, this is a beauty....and yes, its good to see you here.
Ericc
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6 posted 2004-06-13 01:35 PM


Beautiful.

Eric

Duncan
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7 posted 2004-06-13 03:53 PM


"to feast anonymously with eyes
feel again what was"

Sea air leave ya dreamin' Tier???  Impressive brevity...  



Kevo
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8 posted 2004-06-13 05:14 PM


Love at first sight?  this is a precious collection of few words.  Magnificently done.  It made me smile, remembering my wife on our first date - our blind date.

Kevin

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9 posted 2004-06-13 08:02 PM


SisterOfThisHeart~
*sighing* here, I am~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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steavenr
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10 posted 2004-06-13 11:45 PM


lovely, delicate write...enjoyed
passing shadows
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11 posted 2004-06-17 12:45 PM


deep sigh
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