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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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Greetings from GA.....having a wonderful time, and miss being here....if I dont get back before I return home, please know I appreciate you reading....see ya again on or before the 23rd.... ~ ~~ {I saw Dante whispering by the shore take my arms when you are weak} ~ In a field of hands his palms were down -- how far must I travel in my knowing how we have unearthed time -through silence – yes, even laughter -- I felt nothing--heard nothing the touching, the human contact have escaped rituals in empty words Under amber moon nights keep my sanity but only until dawn breaks horizons yellow maybe orange I dare to notice now – ~ How did I get stuck where days wont let me out of sorrow - let me escape seas offer no comfort still I stood there for hours next to you amongst your face and waves of old memories ~ I hid my tears upon aching fingertips & tasted the salt of each I can not explain the small breath settling across my face tell me again how much you love me feed my hunger- my years of everything - my years of searching - for faith on a clock with no hands - Tomorrow may be a better day today I walk alone with arms open&eyes closed ~ still-- before clouds pass leave me to fade slowly into pale shades of blue weeping life without you ~~**~~ le vent chante avec le calme doux calme de nuit sien beauté sur mes lèvres ~~**~~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Greeneyes A lovely and sad write, enjoyed. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lauren.....Achingly beautiful! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
How did I get stuck where days wont let me out of sorrow... ~*~ What a title...to match a superb poem... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Tomorrow may be a better day today I walk alone with arms open&eyes closed ~ still-- before clouds pass leave me to fade slowly into pale shades of blue weeping life without you" Beautiful....simply beautiful writing. Miss you pretty lady~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
How did I get stuck "where days wont let me out of sorrow - let me escape seas offer no comfort still I stood there for hours next to you amongst your face and waves of old memories" Nothing to say but you are awesome. How do you do this so well, speak my thoughts, without talking to me?? Hugs Sandra ~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"today I walk alone with arms open&eyes closed ~ still-- before clouds pass leave me to fade slowly into pale shades of blue weeping life without you" Greeneyes -- miss you, too, and miss your music, like that above -- so gentle. Safe travels!  ....jo |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I felt nothing--heard nothing the touching, the human contact have escaped rituals in empty words Under amber moon nights keep my sanity but only until dawn breaks horizons yellow maybe orange I dare to notice now – ~ How did I get stuck where days wont let me out of sorrow - let me escape seas offer no comfort still I stood there for hours next to you amongst your face and waves of old memories ~ I hid my tears upon aching fingertips & tasted the salt of each I can not explain the small breath settling across my face tell me again how much you love me feed my hunger- my years of everything - my years of searching - for faith on a clock with no hands - ====================== unabashedly wrenchingly beautiful... you turned tears into poetry, painted butterfly wings on the words.   When your own emptiness is all thats getting through |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Yes yes....what all those people up there said! Good to read you again |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
As always it's wonderful to read you! This was so beautiful my friend, so soft and gentle, but then again I have come to expect nothing less from you. You write with such grace. Smiles. Take care and hope the rest of your trip is great! Hugs, Amy  "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Poignant and powerful writing that evokes so much.....~P |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a very moving and powerfully spoken work of art. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
This is so sad, but beautiful poetry. JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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