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Ocean’s Emotions
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Ocean’s Emotions |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Ocean’s Emotions water hits across the rocks it has no other place to go so it quietly runs to the edges a jagged place for its flow this fluid forward movement hard landing to comprehend waved emotion in salt spray softly racing to a stone end "be prepared to bleed" Joni Mitchell |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Wow, Helen -- great!  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Enjoyed --  SusanThe whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
distant minds, similar emotions it's nice to share a wave!  |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Perfect. Eric |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlick~ This is beautiful, you know that, right ? IT IS !!! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
neat phrase..."waved emotion in salt spray softly racing to a stone end" ....so understandably resolute with such a sense of finality nice poem... |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Like your talent, the mother ocean is undeniable. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
trapped but functioning within the boundaries...I guess we all make the most of the space we have |
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