Open Poetry #32 |
Journey's End |
DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
The stars from an endless night Like a sea of diamonds from afar Their glitter holding eternal light . . . A flowered meadow, in silver gleam Faerie land, of eternal spring Cloaked within a veil of moon's beam . . . The soothing song of a forest's brook With the gentle birds for company Like a dream from child's storybook . . . The sun rising in morning's sky As the radiant smile of a maiden fair Tis the glad end of a journey took To where favored dreams shall seek to look. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
this is wonderfully written.... ~~**~~ |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
beautiful |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very nice! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
I do agree with all the above. Great write. JL |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
ditto on the beautiful |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that last verse is gorgeous! |
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