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Secret Love
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Secret Love |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio 
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Secret Love I see your words upon the page They seem so warm today You talk of love and the beauty around you I fall in love each time I read I ponder could these words be for me? Your words massage my aching head They wrap around me in warmth like a soft velvet blanket A tear trembles on the brink of falling Knowing within my heart that these words are not for me. You do not know I exist I am a stranger in the realm of poetic beauty Another day has come to pass Your words flow across the page barely brushing my awaiting fingertips. I close my eyes and wonder once again Could this beauty be for me? I wonder? Love BonBon  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhBonnie~ This is such a poignant read~ I simply adore the way you word-pour the page~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...reminds me of that old song..."Once I had a secret love." James |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
BonBon -- many secret loves are written in poetry.....I hope some of them are for you. ...jo |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
Kind of the secret admirer theme. It is a such a heartfelt creation. Passionate, patient, yet wanting, the patient seems to have an underlying message of urgency. It is beautifully composed and I hope the person notices at some point. What a flattering thing for the author. I really enjoyed the invite into this post. Sincerely, Kevin |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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