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Open Poetry #32

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Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2004-04-20 02:37 AM

Rocky waves soft sand between my toes
the foot prints that follow me are unknown
I think its my angel by myself otherwise I
would of die along time ago

My saviour takes me to a place of
enlightenment amoung others a lesson
learnt as hard as it may be. Somtimes it
takes me two three times to realize what
he is teaching me.

Still I carry on with my life
Still I go on and put up a fight
god loves me and so does his angels
they are the ones that got me me though
the rocky skies an thunder at night they are
my friends the ones that save me from my
horrible fright.

[This message has been edited by Foxyoasis (04-21-2004 02:47 AM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-04-20 03:32 AM

beautiful!

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

2 posted 2004-04-20 03:40 AM

thank you

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2004-04-20 11:49 PM

Nice writing...James

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