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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-06-11 12:59 PM


The Wings of An Angel


I have no
more demands.
I no longer
want to tell you
what to do.
I'm setting you free
to be yourself.
In the process
I'll set myself
free too.
Fly on the wings
of an angel.


JamesLee
June11
2004

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Tequilia_Sunrise
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1 posted 2004-06-11 01:04 AM


well im not to sure what to think of this one, actualy sounds really negitive..........( i could be wrong ) i hope you would never do anything to hurt yourself james, you are a beautifull person. still a good write, i felt this.
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2004-06-11 01:10 AM


Tequilia there was a time in my life, a long time ago, when I was a little bit too controlling for my own good...merely alluding to those thoughts...helps to keep me in perspective...for example...when my girlfriend tell me she wants to spend time with me on Sunday but she also wants to go golfing, it is an easy thing for me to say go golfing...I think of her happiness, not only my own...James
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3 posted 2004-06-11 09:20 AM


Great writing

Andrew

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Canada eh.
4 posted 2004-06-11 09:21 AM


Much enjoyed James...you are very giving.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2004-06-13 01:54 AM


Thank you Marshalzu and Enchantress for the nice responses...James
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