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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-06-10 07:22 AM


Tell Me

Tell me tumbleweed tell me true
Which path in blue do I pursue?
Which path is clear with seamless seams?
And which is there within my means

Which lays bear within my emit
Which will bear my weighted limit
Which will take me to my goal
Which will feed my hungry soul

What do I take, plane, boat or train?
Or is it just a mental plane
Do I walk or sail of fly?
How is the lie do I figure in pie?

My ticket is that I am here
But do not know the here of where
I seem to be within a net
And see no hole or see not let.

Perhaps I be a misconceive
But this I truly don’t believe.




© Copyright 2004 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2004-06-10 07:37 AM


welp, sir, you are exactly as you believe you are and put into motion...

Many thoughts to ponder, but as for me, way to to many questions, I seem to be a more of the go with the flow-er type?  Not that curiosity isn't part of my forte...smiles and hugs....good one Sy Good Morning to ya


Janet Marie
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2 posted 2004-06-10 08:13 AM


No need for planes boats or trains when ya got a Randy Dragon to fly.


Which lays bear within my emit
Which will bear my weighted limit



and can your word play be any cooler???
loving that clever couplet


As for all your poetic ponderings...
me knows that you already know...
your poetry proves it.

*ww*


Sunshine
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3 posted 2004-06-10 08:18 AM



The tumbleweed is weighted
by humidity today, dear Sy...
but your words are wind to song...

~*~


Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2004-06-10 08:22 AM


Good morning Sey, this is wonderful
scorpio
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right...there
5 posted 2004-06-10 08:44 AM


Consult your heart on which direction to take.  Wonderful Sy.

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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6 posted 2004-06-10 08:55 AM


Love your words of wisdom this morn Sy!
Have I told you how I look forward to reading you every morning?
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

iliana
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7 posted 2004-06-10 12:07 PM


Good one.  I think you already know; all the paths toward the same thing lead to the same place ultimately ....
passing shadows
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8 posted 2004-06-10 12:49 PM


ah...pondering the direction and method of travel...

a fine write that I can sure relate to this afternoon Sy

Sadelite
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9 posted 2004-06-10 11:35 PM


Good one, Sy.  Those questions we always ask...  I can relate.        
                 Sadelite

Elizabeth Santos
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10 posted 2004-06-11 12:05 PM


If only tumbleweeds could speak
They'd tell the truth within a week
Perhaps they'd turn a tide or two
and ask a question back at you
If there was no one to be found
Would forest noises be a sound?
If amswers warbled from a bird
He'd say a noise need not be heard
For each hypothesis you deem
To be an answer to a dream
I would propose that tumbleweeds
Could fill the gamut of our needs
no matter what, no matter who
they all stand there in awe of you
for you are wisdom's counterpart
and speak the truth of soul and heart
and there is none that can compare
to what you write with such a flare
You are the master poet here
please know I hold you very dear
Liz

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2004-06-11 07:54 AM


Elizabeth
To me your flower will ever bloom. Thank you dear.

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