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Open Poetry #32
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since 2004-04-11
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0 posted 2004-04-19 11:08 PM

When I hear your voice,
When I see your face
When I mention your name...
I can't help but smile.
You make it hard for me to breathe
I just wanna look into your eyes
and -neVer- let that moment die.
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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
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1 posted 2004-04-19 11:12 PM

You make it hard for me to breathe
god i know this feeling.
well written
Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
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2 posted 2004-04-20 02:53 PM

Great write!

Eric
Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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3 posted 2004-04-20 03:37 PM

Like this a lot.

Susan
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4 posted 2004-04-20 04:49 PM

Enjoyed!
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