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rain tears |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
the cool rain softly soaks its tears into the sun-baked trenches of his forlorn, forgotten face and time freezes its fresco like sheets of wind-driven ice into slow moving glaciers of thought as the steam of life permeates us all and we behold the essence of his presence |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
very deep.... nicely writen |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Wonderful imagery and well written, thanks for sharing  Andrew |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
very, very nice steaven. enjoyed. Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
In awe! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
incredible! |
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