Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada
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2004-06-09
04:21 PM
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Blue - green, in the depths of space Wings outspread and eyes ablaze, The Dragon flies in timeless race Against the starlight's glittering rays. Black void, eternal in its grace Casts its spell upon our eyes, Bemused we see the Dragon's face And watch with awe its wondrous size. Then small, and butterfly winged, Rainbow hued, in dainty flight, Fairy folk in stardust ringed Come gently gliding in our sight. And meeting then in Heaven's dark, Bold Dragon faced by fairy horde, The woven spell becomes a spark That lights the world with sweet accord
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Amanda Seymour
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Nightshade
Member Patricius
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962
just out of reach
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posted
2004-06-09
06:12 PM
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This lively tale was a delight to read. hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. Hans Christian Anderson
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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
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2004-06-10
02:07 AM
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an awesome format/rhyme scheme! and theme!
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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
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2004-06-11
01:02 AM
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Enjoyed...James
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Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada
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posted
2004-07-05
02:32 AM
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thankx everyone for your lovely comments
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