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Old Flame. |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking 
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Old Flame. Amongst the ashes of these burnt bridges lie the embers of our love. Andrew Hmm... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marshalzu Strong write, enjoyed the read. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh, excellent! You packed so much into three short lines. Excellent! (I know I already said that, but it needed repeating.) Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
well done *s M |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
 damn its good |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I liked! |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
should I be worried about anything...? |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
nicely done... regards sudhir |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Awesome. So much distilled into those three lines... CG |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Those ashes have been scattered by the winds of time. Thanks for the replies. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Marhalzu, Yet it seems they still glow a little red. Nice. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I understand this so well |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Cheers for the replies  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
hmmmmmmm |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
short, but good. Hey old friend, keep it up. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Andrew, burnt bridges, never so true. love this. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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