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A Wednesday Morning
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A Wednesday Morning |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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A Wednesday Morning A heavy day awaits. I watch my words carefully as they fall from lips too tired to raise a smile. Though the fog has lifted, the mind plays tricks making my tomorrows seam my todays with a tightness needing the threads to be loosened, allowing the expansion of air to be taken in and released in sighing effort. I no longer feel what I once felt, the non-encounters building walls around the untouchable, numbness replacing. My words build, regrets resting on jaded thoughts and I become unmoved by this life that has created such for me. I am passing it by, submitting to nothing except for that mirror on the wall, reflecting a shattered innocence. It is my war to be fought, a love song gone wrong, a shooting star dying, so far away, and a time whose end has come. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, Bravo enjoyed the read. |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
This is such beautiful writing, I especially enjoyed the last stanza, brilliant. Andrew  |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Lovely write gal...I'm having nakdthoughts of you....(actually, I wish I was "having" nakidthoughts tonight...WITH you....okay...back to the original thought...nice write gal... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Sy, I appreciate your reading me. Andrew, Thank you for such kind words. Some mornings it is all I need to go forward. Toe, I am laughing~~ you almost had me believing you  M |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I no longer feel what I once felt, the non-encounters building walls around the untouchable, numbness replacing. ~*~ It will come to you, soon enough the feelings... but for now, I will hold you through the numbness. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Karilea, for the understanding~~  M |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I no longer feel what I once felt, the non-encounters building walls around the untouchable, numbness replacing this is a feeling I know well, how things change? A wonder I suppose, perhaps intentional? Very profoundly written and expressed! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
 & You have a way of expressing this so as they are really felt. ....jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gawd...this touched me in a way I can't explain... just know that |
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