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VAS
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0 posted 2004-06-08 03:26 PM


When spirit departs
Living Water in its tow
what remains, save dust


©June 8, 2004

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2004 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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1 posted 2004-06-08 04:06 PM



muted
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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
2 posted 2004-06-09 04:11 AM


nice
passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2004-06-09 05:19 AM


gorgeous
Pilgrimage
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4 posted 2004-06-09 10:11 AM


So very true, and so very well said.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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5 posted 2004-06-09 10:13 AM


speechless...

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6 posted 2004-06-09 10:13 AM


VAS

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7 posted 2004-06-09 10:37 AM


Good jobber!!!
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just out of reach
8 posted 2004-06-09 12:20 PM


wonderful !!
love this !

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9 posted 2004-06-09 12:21 PM


Now...this is ALL about nature...
so why not call it what it is, a Haiku?

It's Wonderful!

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