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JL
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since 2004-04-01
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0 posted 2004-06-08 02:06 PM



Just Me You See


It’s Only Me…You See.

If I could be for you that one who I am not, you see…
The one you want or need to see…
I would then be that one I am not …you see.

And if you see me as the one I am not…
Then I am not the one you see…

You see?

Just Me…

© Copyright 2004 JL - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-06-08 02:27 PM


you cannot be who you arenot, see?


Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2004-06-08 02:33 PM



This is a mental rubber band...
and I like it.

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
3 posted 2004-06-08 03:05 PM


I see-sawed the sea, see?


thanx for this...

regards
sudhir

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal
4 posted 2004-06-08 03:09 PM


Ah, I see -- and it is you I wish to see.  This was fun and yet had some serious thought behind it.  Enjoyed,

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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5 posted 2004-06-08 04:13 PM


I really enjoy your play!   ....jo
passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2004-06-10 02:17 AM


reminds me of my college logic class
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