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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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there is a lesson to be learnt from the follies of daily don’ts when so little is done assuming the most automatic for the whinging tribe like the machine on the wall when all one has to do is feed in a card and four digits and watch a wad of currency making its way out like a soft whistle that young men’s brigade held in reserve to lavish upon nymphettes of oomph making their way through summer heat with toxic sing-alongs of countless trivia dressing their lips lusciously vogue is long gone-by as remix is the flava of modern talking boyz and gurlz it goes without saying that while age plays catch-up trends are rebirthed and what was outrage then has now become an out-n-out rage on one of the tomorrows, when Venus tries to melt itself into the arms of the sun, someone will be busy filling the machine, as unforgettable melodies of golden yesterdays decorate arid lips just like trees, as they survive the scorching of age, provide plentiful shade to the needy |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
vogue is long gone-by as remix is the flava of modern talking boyz and gurlz it goes without saying that while age plays catch-up trends are rebirthed and what was outrage then has now become an out-n-out rage on one of the tomorrows, when Venus tries to melt itself into the arms of the sun, someone will be busy filling the machine, as unforgettable melodies of golden yesterdays decorate arid lips just like trees, as they survive the scorching of age, provide plentiful shade to the needy ============================== Well just look at you ROCK AND ROLL!!!!  VERY VERY COOL poem of analogy and word play Sud!!! excellent, clever unique write poet groovy guy. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, Interesting write, enjoyed. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
WOW  What a wonderful read! Enjoyed |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
like a soft whistle that young men’s brigade held in reserve to lavish upon nymphettes of oomph making their way through summer heat with toxic sing-alongs of countless trivia dressing their lips lusciously vogue is long gone-by as remix is the flava of modern talking boyz and gurlz it goes without saying that while age plays catch-up trends are rebirthed and what was outrage then has now become an out-n-out rage on one of the tomorrows, when Venus tries to melt itself into the arms of the sun, someone will be busy filling the machine, as unforgettable melodies of golden yesterdays decorate arid lips just like trees, as they survive the scorching of age, provide plentiful shade to the needy Wahooo, bloody good to read you Sudi! Fantastic! keeping it. Maree  The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write Sudhir! This piece rocks! Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
vogue is long gone-by as remix is the flava of modern talking boyz and gurlz ~*~ I know you well enough by now... that you don't even go there... but you do comment on the world around you; and you do it with style, grace, and some bit of flair... yes, you do. |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Wow. This is such an amazing write, thanks for sharing Andrew |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love this! what an ending verse!  |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
O WOW ... you are all so kind... that I am overwhelmed... Really. Thanks a lot... Regards Sudhir |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
A keeper for sure, Suhir! Did you watch Venus melt? I did -- we get the NASA channel here and I watched it live (stayed up the entire night!).  ....jo |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thanks... No, unfortunately I couldn't, but I saw all the pictures on BBC web site... regards sudhir |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank James... Regards Sudhir |
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