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deciduous gumdrops
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deciduous gumdrops |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
like deciduous gumdrops in seas of lemon tea glories a star-bent chariot-like runner, ere morn its dawn doth break— seasoning life with salient rays of warmth. its strength does beckon, its warmth embrace its beaming glistening arrows to souls their silence breaks and shadows form from once cooled embers fanned with beams of life a cold and somber earth breaks forth with light— the light is good…so very, very good… and light gives birth to life ever intertwining, ever encircling, ever present like deciduous gumdrops in seas of lemon tea the glorious star-bent runner runs his course with certain ease. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Your spirit soars in this one my friend. Smiling... Sounds like passion to me. TD |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"like deciduous gumdrops in seas of lemon tea" oh, yum! tasty poem and imagery |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Steaven~ There are just some remarkably beautiful thoughts in this piece~ You pen sheer beauty~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"like deciduous gumdrops in seas of lemon tea the glorious star-bent runner runs his course with certain ease." Delicious lines (pun intended)!!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
mmmmmmmmm |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a cold and somber earth breaks forth with light— the light is good…so very, very good… and light gives birth to life ever intertwining, ever encircling, ever present Lovely! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
gorgeous, and yes as everyone said..its "delicious" too! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You've added a certain tinge to the tang and taste of this as it tripped out in whisper... lovely! |
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