Open Poetry #32 |
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Transcendence |
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SimpleDiscourse Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 79 |
beyond the distorted faces we will find a hillside overgrown what little we know of happiness what little we know of love what little we know of truth: will loom much larger there you were hidden amidst a song a lullaby a victory cry: "this barrage of rain will not barricade us within our warring hearts." |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
for a write that seems to be a bit melancholic, you seemed to have woven a small strand of hope thoughout it...read it several times...nice job...enjoyed... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The door is open... excellent read TD |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Me too! Enjoyed the read much. jwesley |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A very interesting write, I'm wondering what sparked this one. Thanks for sharing it! |
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