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In Return To See Things
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In Return To See Things |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Where gleam of light, in shadow plays upon a spanse of open floor, a glimpse of some old memory un-spools its' own enchanted lore. In visions taken from a book, superbly crafted long ago, replay the storied lives of folk, and evil they would overthrow. Diminutive, at first appear the stature of these time-worn scenes, yet, somehow they've retained, intact, a clarity I draw from, here. Where gleam of light in shadow plays against the back-drop of the floor, some old familiar characters relive those scenes, as once before. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The lore of love holds it's own enchantment and sparkles in your thoughts here. Nice write. TD |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Enjoyed this ever so much! A keeper for my library. Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Doc "Diminutive, at first appear the stature of these time-worn scenes, yet, somehow they've retained, intact, a clarity I draw from, here." And I, for one, am glad you do!  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhDoc~ 'a glimpse of some old memory un-spools its' own enchanted lore' I find this thought simply enchanting~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"a glimpse of some old memory un-spools its' own enchanted lore." agree with Marge...this line is just too cool! every once in a while you run across a line or thought that you wish you had penned or thought...this is one of those times... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very cool write! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
enjoyed your words M |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
very much enjoyed this read |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Please excuse my delay in replying, I'd completely lost track of this one 'til it popped up in my library. ThisDiamond, Thank you so much. Enchantress, I'm glad you liked. Martie, I don't know if I'll ever become accustomed to having my words quoted back to me, while it's certainly a compliment, it still makes me a little uncomfortable. Analytically, I guess I'm just not that comfortable with compliments in the first place. All that aside, and still, thank you. Marge, "Memories are made of this". Thanks m'dear. steavener, Thanks. "un-spools" just seemed to be the right word in this context. passing shadows. Thank you again. nakdthoughts, Glad you liked. LeeJ, Thank you much. Doc |
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