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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-06-07 06:58 PM

When She Misses Me

She calls to
tell me she
misses me.
I miss her too.
I miss stroking the
silky hair from her face,
the softness of her neck,
the swell of her breast,
and only one day of
missing has progressed.

How much more
will I miss her
when I go on a two
week business trip.
We will see,
how I miss her,
when she
misses me.

JamesLee
June07
2004

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

1 posted 2004-06-07 07:03 PM

Just think of how great it will when she (or you)gets home

Woohoo! Almost makes that absence worth it hehe.

Tara

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-06-07 07:04 PM

What Tara said....*smile*
Sure you will miss her...but think of when she comes back home.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-06-08 02:32 AM

*smile* Yes, JamesLee, I'll be watching for those inspired poems!

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

4 posted 2004-06-08 02:49 AM

Ahh yeah, being missed is so wonderful

Always, Alyssa

Poems are made by fools like me,
But only God can make a tree.
Joyce kilmer

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-06-08 04:20 AM

sweet!

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2004-06-08 06:14 AM

it's all in the missing...

M

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2004-06-08 06:54 AM

Good Luck James, and have a very inspiring trip...Bless you both

7
Member

since 2000-04-26

Posts 113
Amherst, MA, USA

8 posted 2004-06-08 07:34 PM

beautiful poem...

sorry to butt in, but i just wonder if you ever call her to tell her you miss her... i only ask because i always feel like i'm the one doing all the missing, because i'm doing all the calling.

but that's making a lot of assumptions from what you wrote, it's just a thought.

good job, it really struck a chord

7

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no i will NOT wait three seconds!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2004-06-09 12:30 PM

Thank you rosepetals, Enchantress, iliana, GG, passing shadows, nakdthought, Lee J and 7 for the nice responses...yes I call also 7...but I know what you mean...James

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