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Sun-caught.......
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Sun-caught....... |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Sun caught glass rainbows and chased them upon my walls... Here I have lain before watching the definition of crystalline light upon photographs of old waiting for life upon illuminated matte skins. Now and then filters of shade block out your smile. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ooooooooh!! I am keepin' this jewel!! hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, I'm liking this one... very much! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow...you have a way! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh yes, you do have a way... and I lerrrve it. keeping this pretty laydeee  .Maree  The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 wow, what a cool write gemma |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
filters of shade...yes i like this a lot |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
very nice... regards sudhir |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
EXCELLENT! Hiya Gem, this was exceptionally clever and a very poignant read. Lovely |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
"Sun caught glass rainbows and chased them upon my walls..." This is such beautiful imageryl, thank you for sharing this with us. Andrew |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Very visual -- enjoyed this clever penning. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
I had to come check out this rainbow, and your words too! *S |
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