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Kevo
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since 2004-06-02
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Navarro County, Texas, USA

0 posted 2004-06-06 09:26 PM


Heroes Have Eyes
For my fallen brothers in arms

Can you not understand this blasphemy
where the ribbon of life is severed clean?

Beyond depths, lost in the caulderon,
are the hearts of heroes lost forever.

These men have eyes that pierce the night
leering at those who spit upon their graves,

With furled brow and lamenting heart
they find their home beyond your comprehension.

You have been found in contempt of liberty.
The curse of surreal idealism has befallen you.

Your sense of home ruled by the passive hand
has cloaked you in the shawl of slavery.

Reap what you sow in the seeds of submission
while the weight of resolve squares upon your shoulders.

Shall you harvest submission for the heroed heart?
No, you shall not offer your coward's reward to me.

I find my way through darkened day,
to the tomb of the unknown soldier.

Well within my humble soul he resides;
ever glorified in his resolve to defend.

There shall he watch his family grieve of his sacrifice
while embracing the night in which cowards find solace.

Raise your coward's banner you submissive few!
Look upon death's face and say to him,

"You are not worthy!"
Be sure you are looking in the mirror.

While I look upon his tearstained face and say,
"My hero lost, I fear that I am not worthy of you."

Thank you for loving me enough.

Copyright, Kevin V. Reese, 2004

© Copyright 2004 Kevin Reese - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2004-06-07 12:26 PM


that ending...wow
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2004-06-07 06:38 PM


Nice writing...James
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-06-07 06:39 PM


Excellent!! Very much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
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4 posted 2004-06-07 06:42 PM


Touching each and every soul with your heartfelt words.
Good Job.
BonBon

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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5 posted 2004-06-08 02:52 AM


  Such a potent and heartfelt write.   ....jo
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