Open Poetry #32 |
if lives were sonnets |
steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
inspired by passing shadow's "Why I Prefer Silence" if all the lives of those who live were sonnets in form and rhyme and structured so to fit our days in a very ordered time ‘twould be not long ere we would leave the shelter of our minds and want the freedom of free verse in random forms and kinds so seek not order where none exists or structure to reminisce live only in the measure of your life and pleasure in its gifts for thou art one remarkable write in soul and heart and mind the gift that is within thee is your poetry so divine |
||
© Copyright 2004 Steaven R Snow - All Rights Reserved | |||
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Applause...complete and utter applause! |
||
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh Steaven what to say? I'm honored to have been the inspiration for this wonderful write thank you |
||
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very well said, well written, thanx. |
||
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now this... is a |
||
Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
indeed this is a Absolutely wonderful! Maree The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |