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Dreams for sale (revised version by jwesley)
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Dreams for sale (revised version by jwesley) |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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Things have never felt this real, this harsh – dreams for sale. I'm done, I'm tired I can't do this anymore. You can have all of me, everything . . . I don't need it anymore. Was it all meant for her? Was everything you said, everything you did . . . was it all meant for her? Your eyes could bore a hole through what’s left of my heart. I think they already have. My feelings are pouring out, spilling onto the floor but you’re . . . turned away, turned . . . away. Dreams for Sale. (revised by jwesley,whoa hoo you rock! lol) [This message has been edited by exhale (04-20-2004 07:35 PM).] |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Powerful, sincere words. An excellent write. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
well and truly from the heart, my friend... jwesley |
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Censored Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 86 |
Powerful. I can relate to your poem. Good Write |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh my...this aches deep |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
This is the revised version of this poem by jwesley,thanks a million  D |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
...thanks for the thought but no credit needed for revision help, my friend, especially not as little as I gave... this write is all YOU, not me. jimmy |
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