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Counter Balance
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Counter Balance |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Counter Balance Seems counter balance runs the clock Not true my friend does that seem strange? The very tic against the tock Locked in power that’s the change It only looks like it’s in rhyme Illusion makes profundity Against the short and length of time Confusion seems eternity We live within dimensions core Within our soups osmotic cook It is the nature of the store And delusion of the book Be happy with the fairy tail Do not burst the bubbles wall It is the home of rainbows trail Stay the echo of its call Sail your ship in melting time You’re the smelting of the prime. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Seymour, how can I say anything that has not been said before. Your sense of rhythm and rhyme always fills me with awe. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Agreeing with Kethry here. Awesome write Seymour! Have a lovely Sunday. hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Oh, I love that third verse......Very much a Sy write....You know...Sy-fi the good stuff! Have a good day.. Eric |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful morning write Sy! Much enjoyed the read. ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So much has happened this last week, waving emotions against a rocky shore... that this particular poem deserves a place in the library... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning! Good morning! You be an alchemist! ~ for thy prime smelted ore is pure gold! Happy rainbow trails! EA |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Be happy with the fairy tail Do not burst the bubbles wall It is the home of rainbows trail Stay the echo of its call Yep, wise words, my friend. Thanks, Seymour. Are you having a good weekend? I hope so.  Hugs  Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat write |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
I stand in awe. What a spectacular poem. Your writing is well constructed. There is some refreshing imagery in there and I found it thororoughly original and refreshing. I am so glad I stopped to read it. Kevin |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
 That I will try to do, sir. .....jo |
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