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Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2004-04-19 02:34 PM

rice paper kisses

rice paper kisses
torn from corner
to door
leaving salt stains
around lips
too weary
for whispers

©snow'04

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

1 posted 2004-04-19 02:35 PM

this write is as delicate, fragile as it's title suggests....enjoyed

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

2 posted 2004-04-19 03:51 PM

He loves me, loves me not, loves me, loves me not...
This was an incredible read, so fragile. What imagery you created with eighteen words!
Sadelite

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

3 posted 2004-04-19 03:57 PM

So easily torn, and broken..

This poem has a taste, and a sound..

Lovely.

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

4 posted 2004-04-20 02:53 PM

Soft and beautiful.

Eric

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2004-04-20 04:48 PM

I could actually taste this piece...lovely.
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

IndigoEve
Member

since 2003-01-10

Posts 279
Etched in the illusion of time

6 posted 2004-04-20 08:59 PM

like fragility to my eyes

simply perfect.

If I were to touch you, would you bleed a velvet river, running miracles through the sodden ground? --Moi

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2004-04-20 09:04 PM

So much is expressed here in so few words.
I really enjoyed this, Snow.
Hugs,
Ethel

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2004-04-21 12:05 PM

NIce...James

dingusjr
Member

since 2003-09-24

Posts 415
Missouri

9 posted 2004-04-21 12:12 PM

VERY nice...soft and salty

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

10 posted 2004-04-21 12:27 PM

rice paper kisses

i wish i had thought of that
you always seem to impress me snowy

.......
JDW III

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2004-04-21 02:14 AM

sweetly quietly melancholic

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

12 posted 2004-05-06 08:40 PM

Oh my! LOVE THIS! Bravo Snow! Here is a great example of genius at work. The words are just perfect. And I am not ashamed to admit I wish I had written this. Darn it is good. If you don't mind I think I will keep this one? Wonderful dear friend. Just superb.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

GlisteningRain
Member

since 2004-05-06

Posts 103
The clouds

13 posted 2004-05-06 09:55 PM

Maybe I just suck cause I didn't get it.

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

14 posted 2004-05-07 12:40 PM

you don't have to "get" it.

thank you all for the comments..

kevin... your comments here and in private are more than i could ever ask for .. thank you ... from my heart.

s~

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

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