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Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion
0 posted 2004-06-04 12:09 PM

The wonder that I see astray,
Every intuition fails to find its way.
And when it all slowly burns,
No flame returns.
The chemical burns slowly,
Devoured into you souly.
The wonder that I see astray,
Every intuition fails to find its way.

The wonder of the world is gone I know for sure All the wonder that I want I found in her As a hole becomes a part that strikes a burn And no flame re
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iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
1 posted 2004-06-04 12:41 PM

So sad, but unique style and well written.  
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2004-06-04 01:03 PM

*sigh* that last line...*sigh*
Paula Finn
Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
3 posted 2004-06-07 01:00 PM

Try harder
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
4 posted 2004-06-07 01:23 PM

Dear Frosted Flake From Hades ~

Methinks ye might be trying too hard! Listen to the softest, teeniest whisper. That's your guidance!


EA
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