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LeeJ
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0 posted 2004-06-04 11:04 AM


Liquid waves sift through flame
Beauty’s lusty substance audible
I shall not leave those hours
June in Sevilla, those intimate looks
An out of print classic, immortal
Of which I can see the other side
Multiple personalities engaged in replies
ESP of inner beauty…the ocean!
Soul-directs missing persons
The gravity, the allure
Into dream interpretations
Leaving behind conspiracy theories
Understanding UFO’s and
Why we’re looking for them?
Legally ordained ministers
Never play with ouija boards
Out of life experiences
Unsolved mysteries
Buffet of Ocean Scenery …renews peace
Vital organs breathe the pulse of life
Divinity draws a place of serenity
Stability…wonders, like Victorian pearls
A shrine of underwater mists, rolling voids of chorus
Bringing whole heart and native air home
I faint within the liquid nights of voice
With humble prayer and gleaming sail
Pink sky and gentle charm is where I’ll dwell
In every heart beat of the sea
Where fluent keepsakes radiate powers that be


© Copyright 2004 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2004-06-04 11:42 AM


Lee J

You launguage is always so intelligent and deep with pondering thoughts...Much enjoyed!

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2004-06-04 12:03 PM


Lee~
I love reading you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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VAS
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since 2000-11-16
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3 posted 2004-06-04 12:11 PM


lovely ebb and flow of language

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2004-06-04 12:54 PM


you always transport me to other places

thank you

iliana
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5 posted 2004-06-04 01:01 PM


"With humble prayer and gleaming sail
Pink sky and gentle charm is where I’ll dwell
In every heart beat of the sea
Where fluent keepsakes radiate powers that be"

Just stunning, LeeJ!   ....jo

JL
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6 posted 2004-06-04 02:35 PM


"With humble prayer and gleaming sail
Pink sky and gentle charm is where I’ll dwell
In every heart beat of the sea
Where fluent keepsakes radiate powers that be"


You melted my heart with this verse.  Great one Lee J.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


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