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MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

0 posted 2004-06-04 05:12 AM

i hear your whispers
so soft and clear
for that moment
i feel no fear
as your warm breath
touches my skin
releases the chains
that bound my heart within
the gentle touch
of your fingers
ignites a fire
in my soul that lingers
a burning
fire
the feel
of desire

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

1 posted 2004-06-04 05:14 AM

whew! wow! very passionate!

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

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california

2 posted 2004-06-04 05:19 AM

thankyou dixie

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2004-06-04 07:28 AM

I liked this because I can relate.

There are days when all I want is to feel that arm around me.

You spoke it well.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

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california

4 posted 2004-06-04 06:33 PM

thankyou susan

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2004-06-05 01:12 AM

Nice...James

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

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Michigan, USA

6 posted 2004-06-05 01:14 AM

Some things are crystal clear.
Nice write.
TD

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

7 posted 2004-06-05 01:15 AM

your poem sure hits the title on the target!
Enjoyed a glance at romance-it's one thing i just can't write! I admire those who can...
Sadie

wordwizard
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since 2003-09-08

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on the way to next world

8 posted 2004-06-05 02:43 AM

enjoyed the sincerity of this piece

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

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california

9 posted 2004-06-05 02:48 AM

thanks james, TD, sadie and WW for your kind replies

spritrider87
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since 2003-05-31

Posts 294
NH

10 posted 2004-08-12 03:04 PM

all i can say is wow.

"I am the bringer of darkness. A shadow in the dark. I prey on the. The child of the lost souls. I hunger for the love of one unknown. The one to reve

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