Knowing The Stars - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

0 posted 2004-06-02 07:21 PM

       Knowing The Stars

        Sometimes
    when the world is
        black and green and shiny
in the evening under cool green stars
             I look up from the grass
     and know that somewhere,
                      somewhere there is
  green and black,
                 the shiny dew,
the evening under cool green stars
                    and knowing,
                    knowing…….

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2004-06-02 07:56 PM

Ed~
Oh yes ... I know this span of space~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

[email protected]

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2004-06-02 08:29 PM

Ed

There's a lovely circular pattern to this...like looking into a pool and seeing the sky. Loved it!

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

3 posted 2004-06-02 08:39 PM

such vision in this,i saw everything,i loved it.

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

4 posted 2004-06-02 08:41 PM

Awesome write, Ratleader!

Corinne

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

5 posted 2004-06-02 09:30 PM

yes, what Martie said...that helps me enjoy it even more

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

6 posted 2004-06-03 11:52 AM

I think I'll stop reading for the morning now...
I just want this one to soak up in me,
and stay there all day.
*sigh* Yeah...

Always, Alyssa

Poems are made by fools like me,
But only God can make a tree.
Joyce kilmer

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

7 posted 2004-06-03 12:25 PM

More! You left me hanging on the edge, having to figure out the rest by myself. (Nice techniique. I'd have to agree with the responder who said this has somewhat of a circular pattern to it. There is more than meets the eye here...)Enjoyed
Sadie

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2004-06-03 12:27 PM

Creativity becomes you...

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

9 posted 2004-06-03 12:47 PM

Great write...!!

Eric

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2004-06-03 12:52 PM

black and green and shiny...like a handful of asphalt and emeralds

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

11 posted 2004-06-03 03:32 PM

I read this early this morning... and it's rested gently on my thoughts ever since. *S* And while I honestly can't express all the places my thoughts wander... I know I'll be reading this again and again... and loving every journey. *S*

You see... you know... you share... I'm grateful. *S*

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.