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PKreturns
Member

since 2003-07-21

Posts 362
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2004-06-02 03:57 PM

This is not some other emphatic lover’s plea
Not just another, ‘oh please save me’
The saints stand aside with bowed heads
And tears from their eyes streaming green

That was then and a long time ago
Words meant more than they show
With time we realize how little we are
When we see our lifeblood flow

I want to hear the words resound my plea
I want you to save the all of me
In the silence and numb of head
As the eyes of the saints now bleed

They fall down in genuflect pose
I don’t know if I wanted those
Yet wrapped in myself this way
I’ll beg of thee once more I suppose

Tell me I’ll feel all or nothing please
Anything, so that my heart will not seize
Frozen like statues of idols in want
Whispering on the air, ‘please remember me’

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-06-02 04:32 PM

Tell me I’ll feel all or nothing please
Anything, so that my heart will not seize
Frozen like statues of idols in want
Whispering on the air, ‘please remember me’

~*~

But of course you will...
your mind and heart are open
for all good things to happen...

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-06-02 06:50 PM

"Tell me I’ll feel all or nothing please
Anything, so that my heart will not seize
Frozen like statues of idols in want
Whispering on the air, ‘please remember me’"

A difficult situation freezes us in time....I understand these feelings well penned.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2004-06-02 07:59 PM

Would that we could ease the pain for another.

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2004-06-02 11:06 PM

Two voices swept the canyon floor, and rose to meet Orion in their soar...
And two hearts found unison, two smiles
two arms...
Love may be blind, but friendship is clairvoyant...
TD

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-06-03 04:43 AM

touching piece

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

6 posted 2004-06-03 09:14 AM

want to hear the words resound my plea
I want you to save the all of me
In the silence and numb of head
As the eyes of the saints now bleed

so powerfully written, profound and from the heart...may this day be good to you and wipe all apprehension away...wishing you the best
Love and hugs...Lee J.

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

7 posted 2004-06-03 09:25 AM

I've been here... I think I even may be here.
It's all so confusing in the midst of the pain...
when you know exactly what you want,
but aren't sure of anything.
Well writen, PK.

Always, Alyssa

Poems are made by fools like me,
But only God can make a tree.
Joyce kilmer

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