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0 posted 2004-06-01 05:33 PM

Whiter than Clouds. 22/05/04

The vapour trail of a solitary
plane
tickles the edges
of my cold bare feet
as I silently wander through
the swirling eddies,
gracefully it dances
round sleepy trees
as they sway
in the morning breeze.


© Copyright 2004 Andrew Sewell - All Rights Reserved
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-06-01 05:44 PM

Wonderful imagery....very much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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2 posted 2004-06-01 05:56 PM

ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL! ! !
iliana
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3 posted 2004-06-01 05:56 PM

ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL! ! !
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4 posted 2004-06-02 02:20 AM

you are so good at these short ones
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