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moutain peeping |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Turning pumpkin colors, leaf peepers Defining character Blue hued morning mists over twisting skyline Hairpin turns leading to high places Open stories where wild flowers bloom Spare change gives a backward glance Literature growing pensive, emotional Endless natural flame sliding into yellow butter Small dreams burning into life Poetic form enchanting the soul’s landscape To be along side of cotton white puffs Standing face to face with a mountain voyage Caravans of statues and monuments Promising the wind to sing in morning’s breath With internal integrity…liquid shadows Adorning a place, where there agapes silence Dreaming glimmers of water symphonies Shaking off winter’s drug Vibrant leaves lace serpentine And there I peck for crumbs Appreciative for mountain things Which ease like the eagle glides |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ You could make a poem out of almost any line. Enjoyed |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
reading your poetry is like climbing a mountain . . . each line an adventurous step! Rf |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Fantastic write Lee... You imagery always amazes me. Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a fine composition |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
So picturesque. Beautiful Lee J. JL  She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Lee, the imagery in this was equisite -- the journey was breathtaking!  ...jo |
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