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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
As soon as I step into something I've never seen before Never been there So huge for me Beautiful His power So wide spread And real Thicker than blood My mind tries to comprehend what I've seen The highest shine Golden light Gentle clouds and massive might Wooden structures and flesh Human blood dripping through Its all brown The color of flesh Except the center of the power Like a hazy cloud of hallucinatory illusion from the street Fast gone into a dizzy tilt Wobbly, as if alcohol had taken control Sealled tight With vocal melody and love Alone in the crowd A hole in the realms of humanity I'm aloud to see See so much more than before Seeing the hating ones The powerful ones And his love A sense of humor Set the rules we needed Commanded to be Purity Correct is forever Lies hurt with guilt The truth Light Hard Blinded by what you see |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
wow...I had to go back and read through this again just because it intrigued my mind.I got the impression here is that your talking about God...I could be wrong but it was well written none the less. I enjoyed it. ~Live and Laugh~ The memories are worth the pain when the happiness is outweighs the sorrow |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome ending verse! |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
yeah thanx. It isn't about just God like an idea or something, but about everything. GIS |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
yeah...I got the Impression myself that you where describing many things and wrapping them all into one. I saw God, Heaven, Hell/Death, being drunk, and dreaming all in this one write. very cool. - Bonnie Sue Running out of pain |
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