Open Poetry #32 |
Memorial Day Salute to those in the Iraqi Arena |
Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
For my nephew who is in the line of fire everyday.For my brother who is soon to leave.For my cousin who served in the 1st Iraqi war.And to my Husband, Father, brothers, and Grandfathers who all served -- for their patriotism and honor. Fathers Brothers Mothers Sons Sisters Daughters Dearest Loved Ones What bravery lies within their hearts What selfless love they share And yes the horrors that they see Yet remember – They also do much good there Clean water once again flows free And hospitals offer needed care Schools are open to everyone And merchants are free to sell their wares These boys and girls These women and men Who put their lives upon the line Deliver more than martial control They offer a return to a better life And though fear and sorrow still abound And anger is often flared Remember this— You, left behind Your soldier dear makes a difference there S.A.T. The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. [This message has been edited by Susan (05-31-2004 06:05 PM).] |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Susan, much appreciated write. You know my feelings on the effects, but I honor our service men like you. They will make a difference, and you should be very, very proud. and prayers for your loved ones, jo |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Susan, this is special, a gift... May they all see this and know that they are loved and not forgotten for the trials that they daily endure. Thank You |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My thanks and gratitude to the members of your family who have selflessly lived a life of service. I would also like to express my gratitude to those who are presently serving and to those who will be serving in the future. My prayers for the safe return of them all. A very moving and patriotic write. Your poem also demonstrates the good that can come from our soldiers dedication and sacrifices. One great big hero's hug to your whole family! Linda |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you for your hopes and prayers. Though I too oppose war and its tragic impact, and wish for peacful resolutions and solutions, I believe in these men and women who are trying to make something good out of a bad situation. Thank you for your support. Hugs, Susan The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful gift |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Susan, I am not one to mix politics with poetry, but your poem here is exceptional and evocative. So much humanity in your words Thank you ~P |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Excellent tribute! Eric |
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