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0 posted 2004-05-31 01:02 PM




Return
come back to me
take time to remember
the passionate love that we shared
repack your bags and turn your car around
just follow the trail from our past
it will always lead home
straight to my heart
Return

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.

Chris Barker
May 31, 2004
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1 posted 2004-05-31 01:06 PM


Oh my!!  How beautiful this is Chris...
and so full of longing...well done!
~Smiles & Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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2 posted 2004-05-31 01:24 PM


Oh, Chris, this is a good one!   ...jo
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3 posted 2004-05-31 01:54 PM


Nancy Lee & iliana - thankyou both for reading and commenting. hugs!
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4 posted 2004-05-31 04:41 PM


Awww...the yearning is so clearly written, and heard I hope.
Hugs,
TD

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5 posted 2004-05-31 05:19 PM


This is lovely Chris, filled with so much longing.

Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

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6 posted 2004-05-31 06:04 PM


TD & Maree, thankyou and hugs!!

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

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7 posted 2004-05-31 06:11 PM


Simply beautiful, Chris.

Take care.....Sue

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I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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8 posted 2004-05-31 06:33 PM


Chris, knowing this feeling today, with as much intensity as you write of.


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9 posted 2004-05-31 07:28 PM


I felt you here, and it made me sad~
Probably hitting too close to home.

Wonderful writing,  as always......  
Hugs, Chris~  

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10 posted 2004-05-31 08:17 PM


Sue, Gem & Bluesy - many thanks &  hugs!
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11 posted 2004-05-31 10:23 PM


Excellent.  Enjoyed.

  Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

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12 posted 2004-05-31 10:43 PM


Susan - thankyou for reading and commenting.

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13 posted 2004-06-01 02:27 AM


so well done!
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14 posted 2004-06-01 03:07 AM


enjoyed this one


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15 posted 2004-06-01 08:18 AM


Chris,  Your voice is strong and true as is your heart......poignant writing   ~P
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16 posted 2004-06-01 09:45 AM


Thankyou my Passion's friends.
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17 posted 2004-06-01 02:07 PM


you tugging my heartstrings with this..oh dont i know this kind of feeling
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18 posted 2004-06-01 03:52 PM


sweet muted...thankyou so much.
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19 posted 2004-06-01 04:46 PM



A Passionate Plea...
an artistic delight!

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20 posted 2004-06-01 05:19 PM


simple and powerful!

Rf

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21 posted 2004-06-01 09:16 PM


Karilea & Robert - many thanks & Hugs!!
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