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Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2004-05-31 03:54 AM

blasé, my world,
is quaking.

I continue
to put together
pieces of
my puzzle,
in my womb, still lying,
in my
liquid home.

and the vultures are picking
at my
shedding skin.

the earth is spinning
backwards
we
begin again..

blasé,
I do not express fear
towards ghosts.

Apparations of faith.

I felt you burning
but I would not
or rather, could not,
give a care.

I've yet to become existent,
and I thank
time travel for that.

I can change,
metamorphasize,
never do those things again.

But when I get to thinking,
I find myself preferring
that I'd never been
born at all.

Second chances
are just
curses waiting
to happen..

And I'm missing pieces.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-05-31 03:59 AM

I think we're all missing pieces Meg

no worries

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-05-31 04:09 AM

Meghan -- whoa.........yes, I guess that is the feel of blase -- so many good lines and put together in a powerful way. Hope and hugs are sent your way. ....jo

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 2004-05-31 04:28 AM

Wow, interesting thoughts here.

Enjoyed.

Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

4 posted 2004-05-31 06:26 PM

Second chances
are just
curses waiting
to happen..

And I'm missing pieces.

You know what, i can identify. It does feel that way sometimes/all the time.

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

5 posted 2004-05-31 06:36 PM

"Second chances
are just
curses waiting
to happen..

And I'm missing pieces."

you write MY tears so well

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2004-06-01 09:36 AM

How can something this packed
with metaphor,
be blase?

Simple. It cannot.

for another fine example
of what one can do with, and for,
poetry.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

7 posted 2004-06-01 10:53 AM

"Second chances
are just
curses waiting
to happen..

And I'm missing pieces."

Some people take chunks of us and then run off screaming, "mine, mine, all mine" just like the cartoon...

I promise if I see any of your missing parts I will get them for you if you do the same for me?

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

8 posted 2004-06-01 12:59 PM

if i werent scattered in pieces, i wouldn't recognize myself
loved your words

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

9 posted 2004-06-01 01:56 PM

Powerful...you write deep...touching to the bone.

Eric

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

10 posted 2004-06-01 03:18 PM

feels like that sometimes..most times yeah. hug

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