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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-05-30 03:10 PM



Where Is The No Wake Zone

hitting upon a heart of rock
is no place in sight to dock
I ride the tide of a salty sea
in a wooden boat that is me
lured to waters zoned no wake
are waves that crash and break
there was a calm it transformed
blindly sailed into a raging storm
where is the wind’s breath of ease
where sails gently touched the breeze
the soft bounce of tender motion
pleasured trip in effortless emotion
canvas threads torn in a tempters tide
opened up to find this ocean too wide



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1 posted 2004-05-30 03:33 PM


wow, great picture i vision with this beautifully written piece


icebox
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in the shadows
2 posted 2004-05-30 09:23 PM


Painful emotion, about which you have written with great skill.  Your talent grows remarkably.

Brava!

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2004-05-31 02:41 AM


understanding this
iliana
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4 posted 2004-05-31 11:53 PM


Helen -- one of your best.....feels sad.   ....jo
Kristabell
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5 posted 2004-06-01 11:56 PM


Great write. It expresses so much..
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