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Where Is The No Wake Zone
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Where Is The No Wake Zone |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Where Is The No Wake Zone hitting upon a heart of rock is no place in sight to dock I ride the tide of a salty sea in a wooden boat that is me lured to waters zoned no wake are waves that crash and break there was a calm it transformed blindly sailed into a raging storm where is the wind’s breath of ease where sails gently touched the breeze the soft bounce of tender motion pleasured trip in effortless emotion canvas threads torn in a tempters tide opened up to find this ocean too wide |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
wow, great picture i vision with this beautifully written piece  |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Painful emotion, about which you have written with great skill. Your talent grows remarkably. Brava! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
understanding this  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Helen -- one of your best.....feels sad.  ....jo |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Great write. It expresses so much.. |
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