Open Poetry #32 |
How old is old |
Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
I wrote this poem for my dads 80th birthday next week he has surgery to remove an apparently cancerous tumor from his lung... How old is old We asked today Old enough told me this way We asked again to know just what old was Seems we all feel it somewhat Is 30 old seemed innocent to say No 30 is young The sprits say But 40 is old we all knew that No 40 isn’t old You should understand that Well we just need to know is all How old is old among us all Maybe 50 starts the clock That must be old we know that! But 50 isn’t old we were told What makes you want to know what is old We wonder if we all Face some part of old today But surely 60 has crossed the line No 60 looks to me just fine Are you sure we asked the sage I’m sure now! Just act your age Act our age just what is that Maybe it is when we got fat How about 70 we are sure it’s old No 70 is just when we get bold And live with knowing oh so much We know that loving is more than a hunch So 80 must be that tender age When old begins just ask the sage But oh who is that sage we ask It’s Dad and he is 80 now So before that 80 year old sage we bow Happy 80th Dad we are in awe – wow! You’ve lived a lot and we all have lived With life and love that you have bid Thanks for all you have given to us So much that makes us all who we are The persons we are You had something to do with all of that Dad we love you oh so much… Your kids - pbmbb |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Goodknight Now you made me feel old. LOL Enjoyed. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Paul Perhaps old is when we can't count anymore, the number of people that admire and love us? Happy Birthday, Paul's father!!! |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
We are never old if our mind stays young. Our body may feel 180 but our mind may feel 20. I have stayed at 39 for a few years now and my body says 39......Yeah Right. Good One. BonBon |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Paul~You're only as old as you feel... and for the past few decades I've felt pretty young for my age... some say I act it too. I want you to know prayers will be going out to your Dad.. that all things will go well...and wish him a happy 80th too! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always Dancing with you in the summer rain~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Paul, your dad will be in my prayers. Great poem...uplifted my spirits and now I feel like a pup! .....jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
"Age is a question of mind over matter. If you don’t mind, it doesn’t matter." Satchel Paige ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a wonderful tender write. Happy birthday to that youngster! |
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