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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Oversight do you expect me to be here unstirred as I sit in darkened silent heart break where disappointment’s lowest point is bottom again I have fallen short of expectation by holding my heart out capriciously thinking there was rebar within wet sand and gathered stone to make a bridge to find I just need them now for a wall |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
you say so well what so many of us have felt - vivid and painful - well done - Paul |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
1slick_lady A smile is a smile and I am smiling. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Perfect. Eric |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Well said! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I liked the metaphors -- very clever -- and enjoyed the write, tho' sad.  ...jo |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
All the ingredients...so close but so far.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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