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One Breath...
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One Breath... |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
One breath... Drawn slow across the distance held between us. One breath...as if we taste the subtle kiss of our desires as they sweep against our parted lips. One breath... And then a pause to feel a deeper stillness. One breath... Drawn slow. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes....beautiful! ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
breathless!! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
*very big sigh* ....Ericc, this was lovely! |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Beautiful, Eric!!  Written as only you can. Hugs, Ethel |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
oooh, love this!! hugs, Chris  Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Oooohhh! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Shivers -- exquisite. SusanThe whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Breathing you ... and holding my breath to keep you within, but to live I must let you go so I exhale only to feel you drawing me in ... "One Breath" is life giving in its beauty, dear Eric. I love you. Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
leaves me breathless  |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Eric, Very deep, romantic, beautiful write ~Kelly~ |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
drawn slow.... never failing to make my skin tingle Eric. good to read you again xx |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Eric This was absolutely stunning. Your words painted such a vivid and most romantic picture which was a feast for the eyes. "Love - bittersweet, irrepressible, loosens the limbs and I tremble" Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I think more people need to see this. |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
\Astounding!! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
big sigh...so beautiful... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
sigh, so soothing and captivating |
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