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RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08
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0 posted 2004-05-29 11:44 AM


Long ago memories fade
sipped from mind to soul
taken to the afterworld
to all the one’s you’ve known,

Innocence holds the passing
of knowledge
from tales heard within
sleeps reach,

Dreams turn outward and beyond
away from home
where journey calls to them
willing them to go,

Soon little feet
shall move into unknown
where danger shall bestrew on thee
and lesson be learnt from all,

Wonders shall come and go
and emotions never known
shall be felt upon the land
of beauty never seen before,

This journey written with every step
Which took you to the edge
And all the way back home again
Shall be passed on to innocence,

You’ll come to journey’s end
and into the west your travel
one last journey granted to thee,
the life from after death.

[This message has been edited by RedStoneEB (05-30-2004 01:46 PM).]

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Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
1 posted 2004-05-29 11:58 AM


Huh. That poem made me feal sad/good. Yesterday was my last day of school. It was very sad.  Then I got teed of at some friends, but that is anouther story, yet at the same time relative. Good poem.
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
2 posted 2004-05-29 12:26 PM


*Smiling* at your wisdom.
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2004-05-29 12:30 PM


wow...good write, very heartfelt
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
4 posted 2004-05-29 04:02 PM


Beyond Home, there is HOME ...
interesting write, Lee.
And surely away from home there are more challenges and thus more is learned.
Love, Margherita

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