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Susan
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walking the surreal

0 posted 2004-05-29 12:49 PM



Slowly I slip out
Into the heat of the night
The darkness a velvet curtain
Draping
To cover my stealth
As I steal to the river
That winds in silver flow
Beneath the light
Of the glowing moon
And I shed my inhibitions
Feeling the caress of the breeze
Brushing across my skin
As a lover’s touch
Soft and seductive
Bidding me come
Fall into the waiting arms
Of the river’s embrace
Awash in a flood of pleasure
As cool fingers trace
Along my body’s line
And I surface to inhale
The scent of the night
And the breath of the devine

S.A.T.

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

© Copyright 2004 s.a.t. - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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1 posted 2004-05-29 12:59 PM


I would call this divine!   .....jo
Beautiful!

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2 posted 2004-05-29 01:15 AM


"Current Affections" LOL...no, im a smartmouth, ignore me LOL

this was a very luxurious read, very nice...someone will have to mention a nice sexy title for it

nice to SEE you btw

Dark Angel
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3 posted 2004-05-29 02:41 AM


Mmmm divine indeed. A beautiful place you took me to Susan.

Maree.

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

MGROVES
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4 posted 2004-05-29 03:00 AM


WOW!


passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2004-05-29 03:25 AM


yes...beautiful
bbent
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6 posted 2004-05-29 03:34 AM


Sure not gonna do that in the glacial flows here even with that midnight sun lighting the night.Realy enjoyed ,a very moving and soothing write.

Live like it's your last day...
Dance like nobody's watching...
Love like you've never been hurt...

ethome
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7 posted 2004-05-29 04:11 AM


I don't have any ideas but this is a superb write!


Eric

Ain't doin nothin at all
Just answerin the call
Kinda driftin away from it all~~~~~

GlisteningRain
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The clouds
8 posted 2004-05-29 04:53 AM


Enchanting ^.^
Susan
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walking the surreal
9 posted 2004-05-29 11:42 AM


I guess I could just call it "Untitled".  I rarely title my poetry anyway, just for PIP talk.  Thanks so much for your comments   

bbent-- not a polar bear, aye?

Smiles -- Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

ThisDiamond
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10 posted 2004-05-29 03:29 PM


Awesome!
M'dear...you rock.
TD

Margherita
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Eternity
11 posted 2004-05-29 04:14 PM


Embrace

A very captivating, seductive write!

Remembering ....

Love, Margherita

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2004-05-30 12:39 PM


Beautiful flow...I call this silky...James
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