Open Poetry #32 |
Hmmm? What to call it?? |
Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Slowly I slip out Into the heat of the night The darkness a velvet curtain Draping To cover my stealth As I steal to the river That winds in silver flow Beneath the light Of the glowing moon And I shed my inhibitions Feeling the caress of the breeze Brushing across my skin As a lover’s touch Soft and seductive Bidding me come Fall into the waiting arms Of the river’s embrace Awash in a flood of pleasure As cool fingers trace Along my body’s line And I surface to inhale The scent of the night And the breath of the devine S.A.T. The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I would call this divine! .....jo Beautiful! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
"Current Affections" LOL...no, im a smartmouth, ignore me LOL this was a very luxurious read, very nice...someone will have to mention a nice sexy title for it nice to SEE you btw |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Mmmm divine indeed. A beautiful place you took me to Susan. Maree. The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
WOW! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes...beautiful |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
Sure not gonna do that in the glacial flows here even with that midnight sun lighting the night.Realy enjoyed ,a very moving and soothing write. Live like it's your last day... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I don't have any ideas but this is a superb write! Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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GlisteningRain Member
since 2004-05-06
Posts 103The clouds |
Enchanting ^.^ |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I guess I could just call it "Untitled". I rarely title my poetry anyway, just for PIP talk. Thanks so much for your comments bbent-- not a polar bear, aye? Smiles -- Susan The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Awesome! M'dear...you rock. TD |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Embrace A very captivating, seductive write! Remembering .... Love, Margherita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful flow...I call this silky...James |
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