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There Is Still Years Left In Me
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There Is Still Years Left In Me |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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There Is Still Years Left In Me Am I past the used by date Was I considered obsolete Maybe I joined the cookies You have decided to delete Powerful ram you acquired All your hard drive capacity Sensuous was my software You once had space for me I was placed on your laptop My software was equipped You had the staying powers Compatible when unzipped Maybe you should re-install Or download more memory Perhaps then you will recall There is still years left in me Hope©2004 |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Wow! Love this! Love the analogies. And yes, you look to have many good years left to you, beautiful inside and out. Best to you, Susan The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks susan ... yes it pays to keep a sense of humour no matter what Hope |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
not just years but GOOD years! |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
yes i agree with the others, good years alot of them. thanks for your reply to my pain within, you got what i was feeling, god bless you, someone to just understand |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is excellent use of illustrative metaphors....Very clevey indeed! Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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GlisteningRain Member
since 2004-05-06
Posts 103The clouds |
nice ^.^ |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
I agree with Ethome here..very clever writing Hope.... ''Death where is thy sting? Love where is thy glory?'' William Shakespeare. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Hee!  |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great metaphor's! Eric |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
HopeS -- Loved your anaologies; really clever and potent!  ....jo |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Hope, this is a cute write! No tears .... just years! And you better get ready to savour them! Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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