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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Time In the beginning time was born A womb of non-dominion torn And time will guide our futures late That is the cadence of our fate We’re all a part the birth of time A part the primal soup of prime And change will prosper and persist Till time itself does not exist. So have no worries of your goal And have no flurries for your soul We all return dominions womb That is the nature of the tomb There cannot be perfections list That is the body of the mist We are the soil of essence grime The start and end of presence time So do not fear the reapers knell It is to me a short farewell |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
I'm glad I took the time to read this thought-provoking write. Much wisdom in your words Sy. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sy, not only are you a fantastic writer but such a deep thinker. You leave much for the reader to ponder. Very much enjoyed this morning's offering. ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Good morning Sy! It's a beautiful day here in the middle of it all...  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"We are the soil of essence grime The start and end of presence time" and sometimes that is a very good thing...  Morning!"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, it is |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
In the beginning time was born A womb of non-dominion torn And time will guide our futures late That is the cadence of our fate ================================= and from the beginning...poetry was your fate...rhyme is in your blood.   sent you pics links...you should have gotten one yesterday and one today...AOL has been slow...mean storms have been rolling in everyday at sunset for 4 days straight...tornados and hail...tell Randy to flirt with mother nature and distract her... lol *ww*    |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
A Sy classic...loved this one! As always, amazing... take care amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~ So sayeth PiP's father of "Time"! And might I add that: Time is a great healer! Time is on your side! A stitch in time makes nine! Time is the great equalizer. Time is of the essence! ~ Thanks for giving your fellow Pipsters the time of day!  Times out! Toodle Loo! EA |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Time is a word man created. There is no time, merely existence, on this plane or the next. Enjoyed your write. You are correct, it is only a short farewell. Smiles -- Susan The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Nicely done. Enjoyed the read (time after time...  )CG |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio Thank you for the thoughtful answer. Nancy, Thanks for the fantaastic. Hugs Sunshine Susan, Thank you for the read and reply. passing, Yes it is. JM, Got all the pictures, they are gorgious. Each one tells a separate story. WWRS Earth Angel, Time a pesonal friend of yours? LOL Susan Enjoyed your reply. CastleGuard Thanks for the read and comment. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy And in the time that you are you wisdom's words you write a few |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie Thank you sweet. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I believe the limits of your inventiveness are boundless, Seymour! I really, really like this poem!  |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
So have no worries of your goal And have no flurries for your soul We all return dominions womb That is the nature of the tomb So very true, so true! My friend, I absolutely loved the stark truth and wisdom of today's offering. Loved it! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana Your comments always make my day. Sharon, Can't tell you how happy your understanding made me. |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Sy, beautiful, relevant and wise. I might have pulled on any thread of the many you offered, but this line stands out for me at this moment:
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
choshi A pleasure to read your comment. |
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