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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-05-27 08:21 PM


Would She

What would I do if she
didn't love me afterall.
After she told me she did,
but she didn't at all.
After my heart believed in love
enough to believe she loved me.
What would I do?
Would she do
that to me?

JamesLee
May28
2004

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-05-27 09:16 PM


If she is truly sincere she would never do that to you James.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Larry C
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2 posted 2004-05-27 09:17 PM


James,
Too much time on your hands? Or are you a natural born worry wort? Seems to me you are safe. Peace.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2004-05-28 12:05 PM


Thank you Enchantress and Larry...the more I like them the more I worry...the less I like them the less I worry...I really like this one a lot...I can always tell....James
passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-05-28 03:53 AM


love is over-rated I think
but this is a good write

scorpio
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right...there
5 posted 2004-05-28 08:41 AM


Follow your heart and hope for the best.  Well done James.

believe in what your heart feels...

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2004-05-28 04:35 PM


Thank you passing shadows and scorpio for the nice responses...James
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