Open Poetry #32 |
Brain Candy |
LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
My heart sashays in the waves of your true north At last, at last, sweet spreading roses nestle in my breast Your unique aroma touches my mind in morning’s life Atoms fainting, teasing calling to my mind I have come far in your embrace, most fervent power And will grow like the roots of forsythia towards you Like the hours by your side chase each other…chasing me Multiplying into a sensual melody Seducing my eternal soul, brushing lips of silent words Fate winks at each kiss of our story shines bright Like a sailing breeze in twilight We soften with moon glows subconscious level I am loved by your flaming consistency, stretching, bursting Swelling in a world of pearl like a satisfied companion Brightened by love’s blazon circle of promise, in your spell Weak, uncontrollable, aggressive surge of your face, as though my own Lost within your conversational eyes and desired impact of such Like a starlit night fall into sleepy wonders of symbolism Undisclosed waves unfolding as you stare back, meditating Saying “notice me always”, to that expression I am loyal Did you know, I feel, your secrets, surreal phantoms of thoughts Like midsummer touches skin with the intensity of humid friendship Laden hands upon blossoms of fruit, adorned…impossible, yet Within my arms, smothered with delicate glow of new memories Tranquil and peaceful intimacy matures great wisdom Can you see the painting yet to be placed so tenderly on canvas? We stand before mountains which lean in our favor Beautiful confessing colors, like grand mystic dreams I know your silent voice speaks to me in summer air Like sweet music gathering heaven’s harps, we are children of nature Classical breaths from the voice of violins Is this eternal love, of love of which angles sigh And God speaks….I want for you to be… Be of all nature, as sunrise twinkles in your eyes There bequeathed are my words….I am yours As we together listen to the world, across a sapphire sky |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"My heart sashays in the waves of your true north" I really like that opening line. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
A lover’s love song straight from the heart of a poet. Enticing read Lee J. Beautifully expressed. JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Goodness.. there are so many wonderful lines in there I wouldn't know where to start. Wonderful write, I enjoyed Tara |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Yes, brain candy, indeed! ...jo |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
enjoyed this as i do all of yours |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you are heart candy |
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